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                                                   I had A Dream
I had a dream about a world that was gone.
One that was full of nothing.
This world was bare with twigs and leaves.
Everything crushed beneath my feet.

I had a dream about a world so dry,
That even the river were dust and the clouds were gray.
The rocks were discolored,
The sun was black.
I had a dream of a person.

This person was a hero of the world.
Bringing everything we needed,
But where were the toys?
I had a dream where no one wanted things.
Everyone wanted food, water, shelter, and clothing.

No one wanted computers, nail polish, books.
Everyone wanted each other.
I had a dream where this world had died.
The burning of the greed destroyed it all.
The fires were not red, yellow, and orange.

They were black, gray, and shadowy
I had a dream where people screamed.
They screamed for mercy beyond belief.
They cried out to those who were still standing,
Standing on their own two feet.

I had a dream of a world that was empty.
No one was there but me.
My hero had died, even he who had been great had failed.
Which shows to me no one is perfect.
I had a dream where even I had died.

I as there under the ground,
Staring at my grave.
All I saw was bones, flesh, and blood.
I had a dream where man feasted on those of the dead.
Taking out the all the bad,

Leaving the good.
It shows that was we live for.
I had a dream were we all died.
Nothing was left for us to feast on but good.
All of us just disappeared.

Never to be seen again.
I had a dream...
I use to have a dream...
I did have a dream...
I wish I had a dream.....
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This is just something I was working on. I figured I might as write a new poem. I don't think it's as good as the others, but it's ok. But still, enjoy.
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~Flow99:iconFlow99: May 20, 2008, 6:40:49 PM Mood: Joy
Wow. This sounds said. :(

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Nightmares aren't so bad when you get used to them ^-^!
~loversdeathofcrimson:iconloversdeathofcrimson: May 20, 2008, 6:41:37 PM
This sounds said?! WHAT THE HELL?! You mean this sounds sad, right?

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'If a creation is loved by it's creator, it is weak... It is worthless, but! If the creator hates his/her work, the piece is a work of art which must be praised. Nothing can be amazing if the creator was to love it and praise it has it's own'
~Flow99:iconFlow99: May 20, 2008, 6:41:40 PM Mood: Joy
I mean 'sad'. My bad....Hey that rhymes. :)

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Nightmares aren't so bad when you get used to them ^-^!
~loversdeathofcrimson:iconloversdeathofcrimson: May 20, 2008, 6:44:35 PM
Lmao

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'If a creation is loved by it's creator, it is weak... It is worthless, but! If the creator hates his/her work, the piece is a work of art which must be praised. Nothing can be amazing if the creator was to love it and praise it has it's own'
~loversdeathofcrimson:iconloversdeathofcrimson: May 20, 2008, 6:44:52 PM
Meet me in the chat room, ok? I'll send ya the link

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'If a creation is loved by it's creator, it is weak... It is worthless, but! If the creator hates his/her work, the piece is a work of art which must be praised. Nothing can be amazing if the creator was to love it and praise it has it's own'
~Violet-Grubs:iconViolet-Grubs: Jun 13, 2008, 8:04:14 AM
very apocalyptic ^^ it's fantastic

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man vs. man = gay (mmm yaoi)
woman vs. woman = awesome
man vs. pillow = crazy
pillow vs. pillow = crazy awesome

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~loversdeathofcrimson:iconloversdeathofcrimson: Jun 13, 2008, 2:15:09 PM
^^ Thank You very much! I'm glad you liked it

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'If a creation is loved by it's creator, it is weak... It is worthless, but! If the creator hates his/her work, the piece is a work of art which must be praised. Nothing can be amazing if the creator was to love it and praise it has it's own'
~loversdeathofcrimson:iconloversdeathofcrimson: Jul 11, 2008, 4:56:29 PM
^^

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